Writing Challenge Day 2

Well, I hit the word count. In fact, I crossed the line just now at 2376 words, so I'm writing this quick before Only Connect comes on (love that show, but I never get a single thing right!)

Anyway, quick summary of the day. I'm off work for the Christmas break, so I managed to do most of the work during the day, but I'll hold my hands up and admit that I went into editing mode which ate up a good few hours. A little change in Chapter 2 had a bit of a knock-on effect which meant deleting quite a chunk of chapter 1. I also needed to write a new opening. 

This is something I was thinking about last night. The story kicks off with the MC looking at an old house, but the village where the main action takes place acts as a crucible. Therefore, I wanted to have a metaphor for crossing into the forbidden world. I liked the idea of the village being cut off by a flooded road. I went down a few false paths, but ended up with fairly clean copy.

Just a quick note on writing software. I'm writing this manuscript with LibreOffice. I've ditched Scrivener for a few reasons. First of all, too many distractions. Secondly, no global Undo - so if you change the order of chapters in the binder, CTRL+Z won't work. But mainly because the Compile function of Scrivener is an absolute nightmare. If I work in Word, LibreOffice or Google Docs, the document is ready to go at all times. I use it in with a windows Dark Mode so the screen is dark grey with white text, much like Scrivener's Dark Mode.

Okay, the story so far. 

New words: 2376. 

Current word count: 4314

Words to go: 63,748  

New Year Writing Challenge - Folk Horror project.

source: laurieboris.com

The challenge

Rather than do Resolutions I can't keep, I thought I'd kick off the New Year with a little writing challenge. 

This challenge comes in three parts.

• Write an entire novel in January.
• Edit and clean up in February (possibly – see below)
• Submit to Agents in March.

Background

One of the surprises that came out of doing a degree in Creative Writing was finding that I have strengths in areas I thought were closed off. There was one story in particular that resonated, a short piece about the son of a grave robber. Dark fiction was something I found quite difficult after Matthew passed away, but this felt good. Unlike my Victorian vampire novel, which I had peppered with humour as a kind of safety net, this was pure, dark gothic fiction with an honest, earthy folk horror feel.

Gearing up

The genre of folk horror got under my skin and I found myself revisiting old classic movies like The Wicker Man (1973) and Blood on Satan’s Claw (1971) - a movie that scared the life out of me when I was nine. I rewatched modern movies in the same genre too: The Apostle (1997), The Wicker Man remake with Nicholas Cage (2006), The Ritual (2017) and the fabulous Midsommar (2019). In books, I went back to horror master, Adam Nevill, Bram Stoker (because, why wouldn't you?) and folk horror guru Andrew Michael Hurley.

At this point, I had an idea, but every time I tried to outline it, I ended up killing the idea stone dead and I couldn't work out why. But the idea was still there like a sore tooth you can't ignore...

write me... write me... write me...

How can I write something I can't plan?

Writing Into the Dark

And then yesterday, while walking the dog, I listened to a podcast interview with Dean Wesley Smith. I've mentioned Dean on this blog a few times in the past, and I'd heard of his writing process back when I used to read his blog (around the time he was Killing the Sacred Cows of Publishing), but this was a nice refresher. 

Dean calls his tried and trusted method Writing Into the Dark (others refer to it as Pantsing or Discovery Writing) and it's where you write without a plan. You have a premise or a basic idea, but rather than focusing on beats and trying to saving a cat, you flesh out the characters and allow the story find its own path. 

And it isn't only Dean Wesley Smith that writes in this way. Writers who dive in without a plan include:

• Stephen King 
• Lee Child
• Dean Koontz
• Neil Gaiman
• George R.R. Martin
• Mark Twain
• Margret Atwood
• Isaac Asimov 

Photo by Haydn Golden on Unsplash

Maybe it's time to kick off these stabilisers and just ride. 😃

Loglines and Pitching

And so, rather than working on a plan, I sat down and thought about the kind of book I want to write. Nothing detailed, just a general flavour. To do this, I focused on writing a single logline. This is something I learned from Screenwriting, where you nail the basic premise first because you need that to pitch the idea. And in Screenwriting, you usually pitch the idea before writing the script.

So why not try that too?

So I did. I researched a few agents, found four that are a good fit – one of which I’ve worked with before, and has a taste for a bit of Folk Horror – and I wrote a query letter. That’s right, before I wrote a single word of the manuscript, I wrote a full query letter.

Why? 

Because I want to know, before I start: 

• Can I sell this book? 
• Is this a book an agent can sell? 
• Does the premise work? 
• Is the premise so engaging that you must read it?

Bear in mind that agents get a lot of submissions. If you can’t capture their interest in your pitch, it doesn’t matter how good you think the book is, or how clever the twist at the end is because if it doesn't cry out, "Read me. Read me now!" it might not get read at all. 

Writing a pitch is also a great way to focus on the tone of what you’re writing. If you’re writing a romcom, is the premise itself funny? Is the basic idea underpinning the whole project going to make your audience laugh? In my case, is the premise going to make you uneasy, uncomfortable? Because that’s exactly what the best folk horror does and does well.

It took a long, long time to get both the premise and the query letter done. But now that I have that, I have a real sense of the tone of the book I want to write. It's not a road map; it's more like a creased and stained picture postcard of a place that makes my skin crawl.

Cool.

Well, today is Day One. So I thought I'd just dive in and see what happens. 

I managed to write 1,938 words in one sitting. And that includes time to spend going back to clean up and polish. And it wasn't a chore. It wasn't hard and I didn't get stressed thinking about the big picture. I focused purely on scenes and this little teeny tiny piece of storytelling. It was fun. But it also shows that this is an achievable target for a daily word count. 

So, where would that get me in 31 days? 60,078 words. But I’m aiming for 70,000. That means I have 68,062 more to go and only 30 days left, which means I'm going to need to write 2,269 words per day. Minimum.

That’s not bad. That's possible. An hour before work instead of breakfast telly, an hour at night before bed. That's definitely achievable.

What about editing and backtracking?

This is my Achilles Heel. When I draft, I constantly go back to change things. I doubt myself, I swap the order of things, switch POV and even change tense and style. But in this experiment, if I want to keep to these goals, there won’t be time. However, the Dean Wesley Smith method does allow for something called Cycling.

Cycling involves writing about 500 words at a time, then going back to edit typos and polish that small chunk. But not to change. You can expand and add details, but you're not rewriting. And once that chunk is done, it's done. It's in the bank. Then you can move onto the next 500 words and so on. 

The idea is by the time the first draft is complete, it should be ready to send out. I don’t know if I’m that brave, though, so I’ve kept February as a safety net. We’ll see. You only get one chance to sub an agent – and I don’t want to send out anything that isn’t my best work. 

So... that’s the challenge. To write approximately 2,300 words per day of clean copy to complete a 70,000 word novel in a single month with no plan and no idea where it's going.

Maybe I should have just done a few simple resolutions instead 😂

Day 1 word count: 1,938.

68,062 words to go.

BA in Creative Writing - post mortem

Three years ago, I started out on a part-time BA in Creative Writing. This was an accelerated course, meaning a minimum of 37 hours of work per week and no summer break.

credit: Chris Spiegl, Unsplash

While that's a lot to take on when you work full-time, the course seemed to be exactly what I was after. It was structured for personal development as a writer and to explore subjects, genres and formats I would otherwise not consider. 

Some of the things I've written over the three years include:

• Fantasy
• Magical Realism
• Creative non-fiction
• Podcast scripts
• Evergreen blog posts
• Poetry for Performance (and performing it!)
• Comedy scripts
  
• Writing for theatre
• Interactive fiction
• RPG game
• Romantic Comedy
• Screenplay for an animated movie (partial)
• Screenplay for a sitcom (full).
• Screenplay for a drama (full).

One thing I did enjoy was writing for film and TV. Initially, the strict formatting and strange headings (INT. CAFE - DAY) were completely alien but once I realised the creative element of scriptwriting, I found them fascinating. 

I began reading scripts. Lots of scripts. Loads of scripts. And I started writing too - not just for Uni assignments, but for my own writing pleasure. I bought some decent screenwriting software (Fade In Pro) and dove in. I wrote a couple of sitcoms and some drama and decided to continue with Screenwriting for my final portfolio. 

The result was a 45 minute drama set in Sunderland. Along with that, part of the final assignment is Market Research and to write a query letter so that, at the end of the course, I've got something ready to go.

Looking back on the three years, was it worth it? Definitely. I feel like I've evolved as a writer and have a bunch of projects buzzing in the back of my mind to get going. This is where the course is a little odd, in that the point of the final project is to focus on what you want to do from this point on. But for me, I feel like I've only scratched the surface of a bunch of things that I want to explore further. Screenwriting is definitely on the list. I've loved that, but also RPG for interactive fiction (something I've got ticking away in the background), podcasting, scripting for YouTube and stand-up comedy. 

But I've also missed writing longer form work. Writing novels is something I've loved since I was a kid, and is something I'm definitely going to continue with. There is something about the complexities and depth and sheer fun of writing a novel that still gives me a buzz. I've also taken a much deeper dive into the world of Indie Publishing and have a road-map of what I would do if I was ever start again from scratch, because, let's face it. My current backlist is like a pick'n'mix shop.

But there was another aspect to doing this degree. Something I haven't shared just yet. I'm still thinking that one over.

But in the meantime, I'm going to sit back, enjoy the time not having to worry about citations and references and grades, read a lot more, watch a bit more TV, a bit more theatre and see what happens next.

Writing Round-up and a Look ahead to 2024

2023 was a busy year writing-wise because I rewrote my first romcom in 1st person and relaunched it under a new title, Trust Me, I'm a Liar, then got to straight to work on book 2. 

While this was going on, I was also working full-time and doing a part-time degree in Creative Writing. This is a fast-track degree, so it's a lot of work and there's no time off during the summer. Year 1 was a breeze and a lot of fun. Year 2 stepped it up a notch and then in September, I started my third and final year, which made writing Trust Me, I'm an Artist a big challenge to fit in. 

But, I did it. Yesterday, I uploaded the final manuscript to Amazon. This is the first book I've put up for pre-order, so it doesn't actually go live until the 5th of January 2024. I thought putting it up for pre-order might spur me along into finishing it, which worked a treat. Who doesn't love a bit of totally unnecessary pressure? 

Looking ahead to 2024, I've got a bit of a choice. I quite like the idea of continuing the Trust Me... series, but don't really know where to take it next. Usually, all it takes is a bit of downtime and a long walk. 

As for the series and sales and such, it's been a bit tricky to get the ball rolling. And so, having come to the conclusion that I know next to nothing about how to market and promote a business successfully, I have applied to Mark Dawson's SPF Foundation, which sponsors indie authors by giving them access to the two flagship SPF courses - LauchPad and Ads For Authors, plus a whole load of credit to spend on Reedsy services, such as professional covers and editorial services. 

2024 is also the year I'll graduate with my first degree. Creative Writing with Falmouth University is amazing. When I was first looking for something like this, all of the other courses that were called Creative Writing were really just a pick 'n' mix of humanities modules with only one or two relevant to what I was interested in. The Falmouth Course is designed with creativity at the heart. Modules covered so far have involved genre writing (from horror to romance and sci-fi), writing for the stage, for TV and cinema, video games, blogs, creative non-fiction, stand-up comedy and performance poetry. It is so incredibly involved that I have absolutely no idea what I'm doing for my final piece. The final piece (called The Masterpiece) is 8,000 words of creative writing with a 2,000 word supporting essay. This starts at the end of May with a hand-in date at the end of August - so that's my summer sorted out! 

Other things on the horizon are the same things I struggle with every year. Should I blog more? Should I write under a new name? Should I start a newsletter when I barely have time to look at Facebook?

Usually, those things always come down to the same solution. The best thing I can do as a writer is to write another book.

So I guess it's time to take the dog for a long walk. 

Happy New Year!

Writing on a Chromebook

I've been playing with a budget Chromebook for the past few months and have to say, a Chromebook is a pretty good choice for writing. I'm using an Acer CB314-1H which cost me a whopping £79 (thanks to a £100 cashback deal). It has a bright, crystal clear FHD screen, a fantastic keyboard (much better than my HP laptop) and it is super lightweight.

As far as the keyboard goes, on first impressions, it seems that the keyboard has no delete key or CAPS lock, but both are available with help from the ALT key. It also seems that there is no way to turn the Trackpad off. This takes about ten seconds on Google to enable debug shortcuts, but to be honest, even with the option available, I rarely use. I catch my laptop trackpad all of the time, but hardly ever on the Chromebook.

The next thing to consider is software. There's Google docs. You can waste time searching the internet for alternatives, but this means enabling Linux and playing about and it's really not worth it. I managed to get LibreOffice working but it was slow and couldn't access Drive, which is where all the files are. But Google Docs is seamless, and a lot more powerful than it looks, certainly good enough to create a manuscript for ebook or publication. It can get a bit slow with large documents, but I haven't encountered too many problems and I'm working at just over 60,000 words, but for ease of use, I chop the document into five chunks. I use headings for titles which gives me a Document Outline (same as a Navigation pane and similar to Scrivener's Binder). I also use the comment pane all of the time when editing (a recent update allows you hide comments). Getting the work out is a breeze compared to Scrivener - you just download it as the format you want.

The next advantage is the grammar checker. The grammar check in Google Docs is amazing and picks up things that other word processors miss. It is certainly infinitely better than Scrivener, so when I get to proofing, I'd have to export to Google Docs anyway. I do like Scrivener for drafting simply for the option of coloured labels, but I can live without it. The grammar checker trumps any bells and whistles every single time because I continually miss out words when writing. Even drafting, I tend to write cleaner, stronger copy in Google Docs than anything else. 

So there you go. Yes, you can definitely use a Chromebook for writing novels. It's not the best solution. Hey, given the choice, I'd love a Macbook Pro, but those are way out of my budget, and probably always will be. For now, I'm more than happy with my £79 Chrome-buddy.

Veggie Challenge

 It all began with a duck.

Two ducks, actually. They appeared in the middle of a housing estate and were waddling about outside my front door. I went out to get a photo and they were really friendly. They were curious too. This messed with my mind a little. I mean, ducks with personalities. You can’t eat something that’s friendly. That's just not right.

But the ducks flew away and I got over them. Well, kind of. But then last week, we were on holiday in Scotland with a farm right next to us. Our back garden looked out on a field full of cows. The cows had calves. They were friendly too, and curious. They kept coming over to see how we were getting on then skipping about the place exactly like cows don’t. 

Suddenly, I felt a bit guilty about the huge block of minced beef I’d bought for bolognese. 

The thing is, I've never had much success when I've tried going veggie before. I usually fail when it comes to ordering take-away or going into a pub for something to eat. But this happened in the middle of a sober challenge that was going insanely well. I had the daft idea of doing  Dry January in the summer, simply because it's more of a challenge that way, but I was so bowled over by the changes during the first month that I kept going. I ended up doing 72 days and the benefits are amazing. I lost two stone in weight, sorted out a whole load of mental health issues, blood pressure is firmly within the healthy bracket, my productivity went through the roof and I was reading more. I only broke my sober streak to see if I missed it as much as I thought. That was another shock. I was surprised to find that I couldn’t bear the taste of lager or wine. I also hated the feeling of being drunk. Something I thought I loved. 

So I’m doing that challenge again. This time I want to let it roll and just see how long I can go. 90 days is the first marker. But, as it's Day 1, it seems a good idea to do a Veggie Challenge at the same time and with the same mindset - to see what the health benefits are. Why not? So I thought I'd kick off with breakfast.

Let's just say it's not a good start.

Yesterday, not realising I was about to do a Veggie Challenge, I bought a load of bacon to go with the black pudding and sausages that are already in the fridge. Unfortunately, those aren't ideal foods for a wannabe Veggie, but I was all fired up for a cooked breakfast. However, thanks to my morality wobble with the cows, I have some plant-based sausages in the freezer.

I got them out and stuck them in the oven. Twenty minutes later, they’re ready to go. Here they are, on brown bread with a squirt of tomato sauce and a side order of black coffee.

Mmmmm.... Tasty eh?

Not exactly. They tasted bloody awful. The pack says they're made from peas. The experience is like eating Weetabix-flavoured cardboard.

Besides, what is the point of veggie sausages? I get veggie fingers, because they're colourful and taste like they sound, but are veggie sausages meant to mimic pork? Does that mean there's some Quality Assurance guy eating both to make sure they do? So Porky Pig is being slaughtered regardless? There's something not quite right about that. I'm not sure that meat substitutes are the way to go. 

Time to go shopping.

Traditional vs Self Publishing: my personal experience so far

I first decided to make writing a career when I realised that my son’s disability meant he would always need someone at home. It didn’t seem fair that my wife would never be able to return to nursing, so in 2003 we swapped roles. I became Matthew’s full time carer, wrote when he was at school and began submitting book after book.

image c/o seatletimes.com

It took five years and six novels to get “The Call” and when it came, I was ecstatic. This was it, the beginning of a new chapter! We’d be able to make a better life, buy a decent car, maybe even move out of our council house.

A first look at our new council house. Image: Colin Mulhern

Things didn’t work out quite like that. The world of traditional publishing wasn’t quite what I expected.

Promotion

The publisher offered a promotional package that included a London book launch, a professionally produced YouTube trailer, press releases, newspaper reviews and an ebook version – this was the early days of Kindle, the ideal time to break into the ebook market.

The ebook never came out. I had to create the YouTube trailer, organise my own book launch, sort out school and library visits and contact local press.

Money

The money was dire, but I had a foot on the ladder. Book 2 did rather well. It sold international rights and made it to the final three for a major YA competition. Book 3 was due for release in 2015. My career was going great, right?

Wrong. There was no more money, the publisher cut all ties and my agent retired.

 

Image credit: Inc. Magazine

Moving on

I managed to get a second agent, who was happy to represent my next four books but none of them sold. This was getting frustrating, but in real terms, it was the least of my worries.

Hitting the floor

In 2015, when Matthew was sixteen, his disability got the better of him. Grief took over our lives and the world stopped.

Matthew with his mum. Image: Colin Mulhern

After a long break, I set out to write something completely new, something for the younger end of the children's market that Matthew would have liked. My agent wasn't confident about the book or that end of the market, so we split on good terms and I set about finding a publisher myself. I got an offer of a deal just three days after sending the manuscript out. 

The deal came with all kinds of promises: promotion, movie deal, discussions with Disney (yeah, really). What I actually got was a Twitter promotion, and when the first book bombed, the entire series was cancelled.

I was devastated. I had failed in making a better life for Matthew when he was alive, and now I’d failed in doing something in his memory. The traditional world of publishing had led to frustration, misery and depression.

But there was another option...

A brave new world

I decided to dip my toe into the world of Indie Publishing (a fancy name for Self Publishing). Despite the stigma, it's a whole lot of fun. I found the whole process to be quick, simple and very enjoyable. It also meant I could write whatever I liked. So I wrote another children's book, a gothic horror for adults and a rom-com. It was like I'd found a toy shop and was playing with everything I could get my hands on. I was having a blast, but I was also a bit blinded by the Indie success stories.

Indie Giants

L.J.Ross Image:BBC News

Just like mainstream best sellers, there are some incredible Indie success stories making enough money to make your eyes water. 

L.J. Ross was rejected by traditional publishers. She turned to self publishing and has sold over 7 million books. Other self published giants include Mark Dawson, Michael Anderle, Craig Martel, Chris Fox, Marie Force. Oh, and there's Stephanie Hudson – a seven-figure author who made $300,000 in a single month (check out this episode of the SELF PUBLISHING SHOW).

Is it really the promised land?

The short answer is no. Some of these authors spend tens of thousands each MONTH in advertising. Most are marketing strategists first, writers second. Some go as far as saying it's an 80/20 split. 

And where there are success stories, there are also failures. There are forums full of writers who have invested thousands on courses in marketing and advertising, then invested more into editing, cover design, Facebook and Amazon ads, only to get nowhere. The idea that if you spend enough on marketing, you'll make more in return is clearly not true. It's also worth noting that many of those success stories seem to be associated with authors who are keen to sell you courses on how you can be successful too. But why would a successful author want to run online courses if they are truly successful? Hmmmm. The cynical side of me is frowning at that one.

The bottom line is that even with a good product and a bit of marketing, in reality Indie Publishing is just as risky and unpredictable as Traditional Publishing. 

What kind of writer do you want to be?

I think it all comes down to this. To ask why you write and what you really want to achieve. Do you want to work full time from home, wrestling with the ever-changing marketing algorithms? Do you want to write on a morning before work or late at night to wind down? Do you want to be truly independent or part of a team? 

Final thoughts

While I do enjoy the control, simplicity and speed of self publishing, and despite the frustrations I encountered in the Trad world, there is nothing like the buzz of getting "The Call." That feeling that you have written something good enough for an agent to champion, and for a publisher to agree to and invest in. 

And there's walking into a shop, not a local shop, but one a few hundred miles from your hometown, a place you've never been before, and right there, on the bookshelf, is a copy of your book. 

There really is something special about that.

CLASH in my first in-store display.

A Facebook friend found Arabesque!